Can I have comments back please this evening so I can get a move on with printing!
my comments -
the big give - the word doubled should be in red
note to self also - web address changed
sorry to large to load can be seen on FB at
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=375985269140268&set=a.119857851419679.20656.119847124754085&type=1&theater
Looks very snazzy
Second poster, suggested changing to wording:
We have just been left an ideal property in a will.... We have just been left a property in a will that is an ideal base to create Coventry Cat Group's very own rescue centre. This is a unique opportunity to establish the house and it's grounds as a cat rescue centre, as per the wishes of the person who left Coventry Cat Group the house. The property had previously been used as a cattery so the setting is perfect but the pens are old and dilapidated and require complete renovation. Coventry does not currently have a cat rescue centre and such facilities are desperately needed.
Raising the funds needed is a big challenge and we need your help. As part of the Big Give Christmas challenge donations made online towards this project, from 10am Thursday 6th December 2012 - Wednesday 19th December 2012, will be matched by the Big Give challenge meaning our total raised will double!
Donations (from £5) can be made by credit or debit card here:
**link**
Followed by other blurb as it is (although maybe a line explaining what the difference between a pledge and a donation is on the bit about pledges being needed?
Suggested changes to page one:
Coventry Cat Group have been working hard for the last 20 years! Coventry Cat Group have been working hard to rescue and rehome the cats of Coventry for over 20 years now! **followed by blurb as it is***